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The information given by the table is about five categories of transportation recorded in Australia in the year of 2010, 2012 and 2014.

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The information given by the table is about five categories of transportation recorded in Australia in the year of 2010, 2012 and 2014. Overall, all five sorts of vehicles followed an upward trend. Furthermore, the amount of passenger vehicles were generally registered more than the other means of transport while the registration of motorcycles reached the dramatic growth. In 2010, it is apparent that there were 11. 8 million passenger vehicles enumerated, and this number was nearly five times higher than the figure of commercial vehicles, only at 2. 3 millions. In contrast, the number of motorcycles and heavy trucks was significantly lower at only 540 thousand and 384 thousand. Meanwhile, the data of light trucks was lowest, at 106 thousand. 4 years later, the amount of passenger vehicles had the biggest position, 13 million and maintains its first rank followed by commercial vehicles at 2. 7 million in 2014. In addition, the number of heavy trucks and light trucks witnessed sharp increases to 416 thousand and 131 thousand. During the period, the number of motorcycles changed most reached 30. 8% and the total of light trucks, at nearly 23, 5%. On the other hand, the number of heavy trucks saw the smallest rise at 8. 3%.
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by the table is about five categories of transportation recorded in Australia in the year of 2010, 2012 and 2014.

Overall
, all five sorts of
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vehicles
followed an upward trend.
Furthermore
, the amount of passenger
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were
generally
registered more than the other means of transport while the registration of motorcycles reached the dramatic growth.

In 2010, it is apparent that there were 11. 8
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million
passenger
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vehicles
enumerated, and this
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was
nearly
five times higher than the figure of commercial
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,
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at 2. 3
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.
In contrast
, the
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of motorcycles and heavy
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trucks
was
significantly
lower at
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540 thousand and 384 thousand. Meanwhile, the data of light
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trucks
was lowest, at 106 thousand.

4 years later, the amount of passenger
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had the biggest position, 13
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million
and maintains its
first
rank followed by commercial
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at 2. 7
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in 2014.
In addition
, the
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of heavy
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trucks
and light
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witnessed sharp increases to 416 thousand and 131 thousand. During the period, the
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of motorcycles
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most reached 30. 8% and the total of light
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, at
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of heavy
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the smallest rise at 8. 3%.
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