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The bar chart compares the amounts of consumer spending on six various items in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain over the same period.

The bar chart compares the amounts of consumer spending on six various items in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain over the same period. 86NgB

The bar chart compares the amounts of consumer spending on six various items in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain over the same period. Overall, it is clear that Britain people spent significantly more money than people in the other three countries on all six goods. In addition, the highest rate of different products consumption was recorded in photographic film. As per information, the consumer in Germany spent money all of six items was the lowest figure, with just under 150, 000 pounds. By contrast, the population in Britain spent just over 170, 000 pounds on photographic film, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. Toys were spent more money than any other product. The highest amounts were recorded in Britain, accounting for over 160, 000 pounds. Besides, the figures for spending on toys were the same in both France and Italy, at nearly 160, 000 pounds. For the next four items, Italians paid out for CDs, perfume, tennis racquets, and personal stereos were lower than that of toys. However, while French people spent more than Italians on photographic film and CDs. The amount spent by French people on tennis racquets, around 145, 000 pounds, is the lowest figure shown on the chart.

The bar chart compares the amounts of consumer spending on six various items in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain over the same period.

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