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The bar chart compares ratings of six-car features

The bar chart compares ratings of six-car features DV5Dp

The bar chart compares my personal ratings of six-car features with the ratings of the whole class. Generally, the chart shows quite a lot of differences in our ratings, however, we do opt for the features which the second most important thing is the stereo system. While my class considered the sun loop to be the most fundamental feature, I just felt that it is just rated at fourth. Interestingly, I suppose that the most necessary feature when purchasing a car is air conditioning, whilst my class rate is just the third rank. Sincerely, the least crucial feature for me is the airbag, which the class similarly approves. In my opinion, the color is a little more crucial than the alarm.

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