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The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets for last year and six years ago.

The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets for last year and six years ago. kgNm8
The prvovided graph illustares the comparision of 10 exportation markets of America about food process in the 5-year period commencing in the perious 6 years. Taken as a whole, the US witnessed an upward trend in the amount of top ten processed food export markets. Furthermore, the figure for Canada was always predominant over the period shown. With respect to 5 highest positions of the diagram, the first was represented for Canadian import with 9. 3 billion US$ whereas the rest of the World ranked the second ( 6. 3 billion ). At the same time, about 4. 0 billion US dollar was earned by the exportation of America to Mexico markets, followed by around 2. 5 billion of the European Union and Japan. In the following 5 years, the data of processed food export to the Canada and the global remainers was on the significant increase to more than 10. 0 billion and a corressponding growth was also recorded for the others from 2. 5 to 6. 1 respectively. Turning to 5 remaining ones, there was compatable figures of South Korea, China, Philippines, Australia and Hong Kong, at under 1 billions 6 years ago. Last year, the volume of South Korean, Australian and Hong Kong where import the processed food products from the US tripled to 2. 1, 1. 0 and 0. 8 billion US$ in turn; the same trend was seen in the value of export to South Korea and Australia, which doubled than these 5 years before.
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6 years.

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US$ whereas the rest of the World ranked the second
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6. 3
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. At the same time, about 4. 0
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was earned
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of the European Union and Japan. In the following 5 years, the data of processed
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export to the Canada and the global
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was on the significant increase to more than 10. 0
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recorded for the others from 2. 5 to 6. 1
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6 years ago. Last
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, the volume of South Korean, Australian and Hong Kong where import the processed
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products from the US tripled to 2. 1, 1. 0 and 0. 8
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US$ in turn; the same trend was
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets for last year and six years ago.

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