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The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. gjEO

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of three different industrial sectors contributing to India`s economy between 1960 and 2000. Overall, the agriculture sector experienced a downward trend, however, there was a steady increase in the services sector throughout the period, similarly, industry rose rapidly and remained the same the last three decades. In 1960, the proportion of the agriculture sector was over 60%, before a gradual decrease, this figure accounted for around 13% of the total GDP in the final year. The rate of services rapidly jumped up from around 15% in 1960 to more than 60% in the last period. The industry sector, in 1960, was around 15 percent and jumped up to 20 percent over one decade. After that date, this figure rose slightly to around 25 percent and remained static throughout the last three decades shown.

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 economy between 1960 and 2000.

Overall
, the agriculture You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 experienced a downward trend, however
, there was a steady increase in the services You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 throughout the period, similarly
, industry rose rapidly
 and remained the same the last three decades.

In 1960, the proportion of the agriculture You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 was over 60%, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 a gradual decrease, this figure accounted for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 13% of the total GDP in the final year. The rate of services rapidly
 jumped up from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 15% in 1960 to more than 60% in the last period.

The industry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
, in 1960, was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 15 percent and jumped up to 20 percent over one decade. After that date, this figure rose slightly
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 25 percent and remained static throughout the last three decades shown. 