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The Bar chart below shows the Olympic medals won by twelve countries.

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The bar chart compares the number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. In general, These countries were USA, Sovet Union, UK, France, Germany, Italy, Sweden, Australia, Hungary, EastGermany, Jaoan, China. Moreover, It can be say, USA had been won amount of the highest medals appromixtably 900 at that time, that medalas were gold, in addition to that, as can be seen, that performance had swiftly increased. Notwithstandly, On other hand, UK was secondly repidly developed, that' number provided about 400 at the same time. At any case ay other countries had improved almost the same in each other. In conclution, It is clear to say the twelve of them had changed in the simmilar times.
The bar chart compares the number of Olympic medals won by twelve
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