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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The illustration shows five types of industries present in Brazil's economy during 2009 and 2019, and it includes a future vision for 2029. In the three moments, Finance is the higher industry. During 2009 is about 30%; 2019 is 35%; and 2029 could be close to 40%. But, when we see the lower industry, there are differences. For example for 2009, Food processing has 10%. This industry has higher increase of percentage, 10% during 2019. However for 2019 and 2029, Manufacturing has 15% and 5% respectively. There are two industries with little changes. Tourism, the percentage is between 25% and 20% during the twenty years of the investigation. Another industry with a similar movement is Oil, coal and gas; the percentage begin in 25%, increase to 30% and return to 25%, between 2009 and 2029. The data indicate that main Brazil's economy has been Finance, Tourism and Oil, coal ad gas between 2009 and 2019, and they predict that 2029 the situation will be the same.

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 present in Brazil's economy during 2009 and 2019, and it includes a future vision for 2029.

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 in 25%, increase to 30% and return to 25%, between 2009 and 2029.

The data indicate that main Brazil's economy has been Finance, Tourism and Oil, coal ad gas between 2009 and 2019, and they predict that 2029 the situation will be the same. 