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the table below shows the total appearances in court of 10- to 18-year-old children, distinguished by age and sex, in New South Wales, Australia between July 1994 and June 1995. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table displays the number of appearances in court by children ranging from the age of 10 to 18 years old in New South Wales, Australia between July 1994 and June 1995. The information is distinguished by age, and then the kids are categorized to boys and girls. It is clear, in first glance, that the most court appearances have been made by boys and not by girls. The contrast between the numbers is one of large scale. The most extreme difference in the table is the age 11, where the number for the boys is 90, whereas for the girls is only 3. A more representative example is the age 16, and in this case the boys who have made a court appearance are 2915, and the girls are 530. Overall, the most court appearances made by children, both boys and girls, are at the age of 17, while the second most are at the age of 16. On the other side, the younger kids included in the table, ages 10, 11 and 12, show the least court appearances in one year.
The table displays the number of
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in New South Wales, Australia between July 1994 and June 1995. The information
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, and then the kids
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. It is
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have
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and not by
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. The contrast between the numbers is one of large scale. The most extreme difference in the table is the
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age
11, where the number for the
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boys
is 90, whereas for the
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is
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3. A more representative example is the
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16, and
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boys
who have made a
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court
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are 2915, and the
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are 530.

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, the most
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made by children, both
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, are at the
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of 17, while the second most are at the
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of 16. On the other side, the younger kids included in the table,
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10, 11 and 12,
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in one year.

IELTS academic the table below shows the total appearances in court of 10- to 18-year-old children, distinguished by age and sex, in New South Wales, Australia between July 1994 and June 1995. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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