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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below represents the proportion of four various materials (paper & cardboard, glass container, aluminum cans, plastics) which were recycled in a specific country for 28 years from 1982 to 2010. 

Overall, we could notice from the chart that, paper and cardboard were the most recycled material within the year 1990 to 1994 with an 80 percent ratio. However we could also depict from the same chart that the material with the least percent was plastic which was well under 10 percent in the year 1989, moreover, we could see that all the materials had the highest recycling ratio in 2008 apart from paper and cardboard which experienced a fall. 

With regards to paper and cardboard, the ratio decreased substantially to 2008 after it peaked at 80 percent in 1992. Likewise, glass containers which witnessed a slight fluctuation falling from 50 percent to 40 percent within the year 1982 to 1989 then increased substantially reaching it’s prime at 60 percent in the year 2008. On the other hand, it was an upward trend for aluminum cans, which peaked at a little over 40 percent. Whereas, plastics, the least recycled materials with a little under 10 percent recycling ratio in the year 2009.
The chart below represents the proportion of four various
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materials
(paper & cardboard, glass container, aluminum cans, plastics) which
were recycled
in a specific country for 28 years from 1982 to 2010.
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Overall
, we could notice from the chart that, paper and cardboard were the most recycled
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material
within the
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1990 to 1994 with an 80
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percent
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ratio
.
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However
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also
depict from the same chart that the
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material
with the least
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was plastic which was well under 10
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percent
in the
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year
1989,
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that all the
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materials
had the highest recycling
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in 2008 apart from paper and cardboard which experienced a fall.
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paper and cardboard, the
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ratio
decreased
substantially
to 2008 after it peaked at 80
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percent
in 1992.
Likewise
, glass containers which witnessed a slight fluctuation falling from 50
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percent
to 40
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percent
within the
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year
1982 to 1989 then increased
substantially
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it’s
prime at 60
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in the
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2008.

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over 40
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percent
. Whereas, plastics, the least recycled
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materials
with a
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under 10
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recycling
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in the
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2009.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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