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The bar chart illustrates a survey on the literacy proportion by the different areas between two genders in 2011.

The bar chart illustrates a survey on the literacy proportion by the different areas between two genders in 2011. It is clear that the highest figure belonged to the central Asia for both sexes and furthermore the lowest one appertained to the Sub-Saharan Africa and three areas had approximately the same figures and situations each. in 2011, Central Asia, Central/Eastern Europe and East Asia/Pacific were close to 100% and after those the literacy proportion has fallen noticeably. The rates for South and West Asia and Sub-Saharan Africa were same and were almost 60% for women, By contrast, South and West Africa had more advocators than the Sub-Saharan Africa ( near 80%
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2011, Central Asia, Central/Eastern Europe and East Asia/Pacific were close to 100% and after those the literacy proportion has fallen
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. The rates for South and West Asia and Sub-Saharan Africa were same and were almost 60% for women, By contrast, South and West Africa had more
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates a survey on the literacy proportion by the different areas between two genders in 2011.

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1 paragraphs
110 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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