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What magazines are popular now?

What magazines are popular now? Well magazine popular magazine I think are the gossip ones because nowadays people is interested in famous people and celebrities being captured in doing things strange things or maybe some celebrity couples and stuff like that so maybe the most popular ones are the gossip magazines especially in my country Italy but maybe even the ones that brings knowledge to the table can be popular as well.
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IELTS academic What magazines are popular now?

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
72 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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