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the amount and quality of water supplied

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These two bar charts show the amount and quality of water supplied in Australia and South East Asia between the year 1990 and 2010. Overall, the amount and quality of water supplied in Australia were higher than in South East Asia between two time periods. According to the first bar charts, 80% of Australian people were provided water in 1990, while, only about 38% of South East Asia population is given water. After 20 years, the supply of water in Australia was increase to almost 100% and about 77% of people being provided with water in South East Asia. The increase in the amount of water supplied in Australia was about 20% while in South East Asia it was about 39% in 2010. However, the change of individuals receiving water in South East Asia is low in both the years compared with Australia. The second chart illustrates the degree of its cleanliness. In 1990 to 2010, the level of purity of water are delivered to Australia from 70% to a little above 80%, whereas, in the South East Asia had a small decrease in their level of purity from 40% to about 38%.
These two bar charts
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supplied in Australia and South East Asia between the year 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the amount and quality of
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supplied in Australia were higher than in South East Asia between two time periods.

According to the
first
bar charts, 80% of Australian
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were provided
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in 1990, while,
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about 38% of South East Asia population is
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. After 20 years, the supply of
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in Australia was increase to almost 100% and about 77% of
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people
being provided
with
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water
in South East Asia. The increase in the amount of
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water
supplied in Australia was about 20% while in South East Asia it was about 39% in 2010.
However
, the
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change
of individuals receiving
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water
in South East Asia is low in both the years compared with Australia.

The second chart illustrates the degree of its cleanliness. In 1990 to 2010, the level of purity of
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water
are delivered
to Australia from 70% to a
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little
above 80%, whereas, in the South East Asia had a
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small
decrease in their level of purity from 40% to about 38%.
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IELTS academic the amount and quality of water supplied

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6.5
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