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The UK Citizens' expenditure in 3 categories in 2004

The UK Citizens' expenditure in 3 categories in 2004 86D3V

The below bar chart reveals the people's expenditure in three parts in various age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. It is clear that citizens' expenditure varies with ages and priority of them were different in each category. The vertical axis of the graph shows the percentage of total spending money while the horizontal axis is for five age categories. In each category, these three parts were compared: food and drinks, restaurant and hotels, and entertainment. People who were above 76 spent more money than others on food and drinks which was about 23%. The second place in this category belongs to 61-75 which spent 20%. As is clear from the chart, by increasing the age, the use of food and drinks was increased. For the restaurant and hotel, people who were under 30 spent more money than any other ages and that was about 15% while this quantity for 61-75 was the least and was about 3%. The restaurant and hotel expenditure had a downward trend. Entertainment was so popular for 61-75 ages which they spent about 23% on it and the last position for this category was for people who were under 30 ages(about 7%).

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