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The first one is a pie chart which explain what Anthropology of the same university did after the end of their degrees.

The first one is a pie chart which explain what Anthropology of the same university did after the end of their degrees. WqWJa

The document is divided into two different diagrams. The first one is a pie chart which explain what Anthropology of the same university did after the end of their degrees. The graph diagram is a table. It shows the incomes of the former students after five years Directly after the graduation most of the graduates choose to start a career, about two third. But only 52 percent will have access to full-time job which means 15 percent end up working in part time job. The other third is split between postgrad study and unemployment. Also, 8 percent of the anthropologists didn’t notice their occupation after graduating. Five years after graduating the salaries of the anthropologist stand between 25, 000$ and 100, 000$ and more. Those scientists are employed in three major sectors: freelance consultants, government sector and lastly private companies. 5 percent of the scientists making between 25, 000$ and 45, 000$ work as freelance consultants or in government sector but 1 out of 10 anthropologists in private companies as this range of income. 15 percent of the anthropologists working either as consultant or for the government makes between 50, 000$ and 74, 999$ a year but it totals up to more than a third for those who work in private societies. 80 percent of those who work as freelance consultant and for the public area makes more than 74, 999$ a year when it is only 55 percent in private societies. This table shows how anthropologists have better incomes if they work by themselves or for the government raver than for private companies.

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