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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000 Wx9k
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who are living bay themselves in five different age groups in the USA, in 1850, 1900, 1950 and 2000. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of Americans aged 65-64 who lived alone were highest in all measured years. In addition, figures for all age groups increased over the period shown. The percentage of those living alone aged 35-46, 47-54, and 55-64 all followed similar trends over the measured period. There was a significant increase in these figures beginning at around 2%, 2% and approximately 3% in 1850, and ending at around 7%, 13% and 17% respectively, in 2000. Additionally, Americans aged 27-36 did not start living alone until 1900, beginning at just over 2%, and rising to around 8% in 2000. Furthermore, Americans aged 17-26 also did not start living alone until around 1950, beginning at around 2% and increasing to approximately 5% in 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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age groups in the USA, in 1850, 1900, 1950 and 2000.

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that the proportion of Americans
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65-64 who
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were highest in all measured years.
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, figures for all age groups increased over the period shown.

The percentage of those
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35-46, 47-54, and 55-64 all followed similar trends over the measured period. There was a significant increase in these figures beginning at
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around
2%, 2% and approximately 3% in 1850, and ending at
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7%, 13% and 17%
respectively
, in 2000.

Additionally
, Americans
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aged
27-36 did not
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start
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living
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until 1900, beginning at
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over 2%, and rising to
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around
8% in 2000.
Furthermore
, Americans
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aged
17-26
also
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until
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1950, beginning at
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2% and increasing to approximately 5% in 2000.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000

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