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The line graph illustrates the climate conditions in Athens, Barcelona, and Sydney over the period of one year. Overall, it can be seen that generally, the cities of Athens and Barcelona have a similar temperature movement in comparison with Sydney. Both Athens and Barcelona’s temperatures peak during the summer months of June, July and August, while Sydney has lower temperatures during those three months. In contrast, Sydney’s highest temperatures are when Athens and Barcelona have their lowest. To begin with, Athens has approximately 8 degrees of temperature in January with a gradual increase to 25 degrees in June. However, this trend slowly declined each month reaching close to 8 degrees by December. Similarly, Barcelona had a similar trend but started with just a little below 7 degrees in January. Nonetheless, after the succeeding months, there had been a steep incline to the temperature that peaked at around 28 degrees in August. But, a sudden drop to nearly 5 degrees per month was experienced for the remaining months until December with exact 6 degrees. In contrast to Athens and Barcelona, Sydney’s temperature was just a little over 27 degrees in January but slowly decreased in the following months, reaching the lowest point at 14 degrees in July. Finally, this average monthly temperature incrementally increased each month, ending with the same temperature of 25 degrees in December.

The line graph illustrates the climate conditions in Athens, Barcelona, and Sydney over the period of one year.

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seen
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temperature
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temperatures
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months
 of June, July and August, while Sydney has lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperatures
 during those three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
months
. In contrast
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temperatures
 are when Athens and Barcelona have their lowest.

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begin
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degrees
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temperature
 in January with a gradual increase to 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in June. However
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month
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degrees
 by December. Similarly
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degrees
 in January. Nonetheless, after the succeeding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
months
, there had been a steep incline to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
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degrees
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But
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month
was experienced
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months
 until December with exact 6 degrees.

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 to Athens and Barcelona, Sydney’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
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just
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little
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degrees
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but
slowly
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months
, reaching the lowest point at 14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in July. Finally
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temperature
incrementally
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month
, ending with the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 of 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 in December. 