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The 2 maps show an area before and after building the hydroelectric dam

The 2 maps show an area before and after building the hydroelectric dam mW861

The maps illustrate the change of a place before and after construction the hydroelectric dam during a course of ten years from 1990. Overall, the area witnessed a large lake was built with purpose on fishing in 2000, replacing the main street and objects around. Besides, numerous electricity installations and residences were constructed in free space after having the hydroelectric dam. In 1990, the north of this area had a main road in the centre which separated this place into two sides. One side had forest, ancient structure, rare plants and animals and the other had irrigate farmland and villages. However, a lake was created which covered the whole area in 2000. The lake was used for sailing and fishing, while a hotel occupied on the area where houses located before. After the period building the dam, the space in the east of the area did had a significant shift. Several electricity factories were built along the river, with villages which were occupied by commercial hotels in 2000.

The maps illustrate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of a place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after construction the hydroelectric dam during a course of ten years from 1990.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 witnessed a large lake was built
 with purpose on fishing in 2000, replacing the main street and objects around. Besides
, numerous electricity installations and residences were constructed
 in free space after having the hydroelectric dam.

In 1990, the north of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 had a main road in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 which separated this place into two sides. One side had forest, ancient structure, rare plants and animals and the other had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "irrigated".irrigated
irrigate
 farmland and villages. However
, a lake was created
 which covered the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 in 2000. The lake was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for sailing and fishing, while a hotel occupied on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 located This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

After the period building the dam, the space in the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 did The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "have"have
had
 a significant shift. Several electricity factories were built
 along the river, with villages which were occupied
 by commercial hotels in 2000. 