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Overweight Australian men and women

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The bar chart illustrates the obesity rate comparison between both sexes in the country of Australia during the period of 1980 to 2010. Overall, the chat highlights the overweighted males from 1980 to 2010 other than females. however, there is a significant growth in both sexes about 25 percent among these years. The female category reveals a considerable change about 10 percentage between each decade from 35 percent to 55 percent. In the year of 2000, it is on its peak. Thereafter, shows a dipped with 5 percent in 2010. Although, 1980 showed its least count with 35. On the other hand, the male category depicts a constant rose in every year compared with the opposite sex. Consequently, they were on its hight in the year of 2000 with the given figure of 65 percentage. Likewise, 1980 was its least percentage with only 40. Similarly, between every decade there was a rose of about 10 percent nevertheless of the final year 2010.

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