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the diagram highlight about the preparing fruit juice, summarise th information by selecting main features

the diagram highlight about the preparing fruit juice, summarise th information by selecting main features OyDp3
The diagram illustrates the stages in the process of making fruit juice production. Overall, there are fifteen stages. To begin, The farmers are picked fresh oranges sent them to the factory by lorries. Next, the oranges are washed and put into the machine to extract oranges. After that process, the machine is produced the waste solid and fresh juice. The waste solid can get for animal feed as well. Fresh juice was the main output, it is filled into the bottles and packaged and then send directly to the shop for sale. However, the main output can store another way. Fresh juice can store in the refrigerator truck and send to the factory for evaporation. That process water in the juice has got too low an get the concentrate juice. After that, the final product was canning and sent to the warehouse by lorries. Then the factory is used that can and add the water to it, then packaged the bottles and send to the shops.
The diagram illustrates the stages in the process of making fruit
juice
production.
Overall
, there are fifteen stages.

To
begin
, The farmers
are picked
fresh
oranges
sent
them to the factory by lorries.
Next
, the oranges
are washed
and put into the machine to extract oranges. After that process, the machine
is produced
the waste solid and
fresh
juice
. The waste solid can
get
for animal feed
as well
.
Fresh
juice
was the main output, it
is filled
into the bottles and packaged and then
send
directly
to the shop for sale.

However
, the main output can store another way.
Fresh
juice
can store in the refrigerator truck and
send
to the factory for evaporation. That process water in the
juice
has
got
too low
an
get
the concentrate
juice
. After that, the final product was canning and
sent
to the warehouse by lorries. Then the factory is
used
that can and
add
the water to it, then packaged the bottles and
send
to the shops.
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