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THE PLAN BELWO SHOW THE ILAYOUT OF A UNIVERSITY SPORTS CENTRE NOW AND HOW IT WILL LOOK AFTER REDEVELOPMENT.

THE PLAN BELWO SHOW THE ILAYOUT OF A UNIVERSITY SPORTS CENTRE NOW AND HOW IT WILL LOOK AFTER REDEVELOPMENT. 9wm0p

THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS CHANGE THAT TOOK PLACE IN SCHOOL PLAYGROUND IN FUTURE PLANS AS COMPARED TO PRESENT LAYOUT. OVERALL, THERE ARE SIGNIFICANT CHANGE IN FUTURE LAYOUT AS NEW FACILITIES IS INTRODUCED WHICH IS NOT AVAILABLE IN RECENT PLAN. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE LATTER PLAN FORMS A SINGLE PROPERTY WHICH IS DISTRIBUTED IN THREE BUILIDNG IN PRESENT. IN THE WEST SIDE OF MAP OUTDOOR COURTS IS REPLACED BY LIESUER POOL AND THE CHANGING ROOM IS CONTRUCTED IN NEW PLAN JUST BELOW THE LIESURE ROOM. THE SIZE OF POOL AND RECEPTION REMAINED THE SAME. SPORTS SHOP AND IS INTRODUCED ALONG WITH CHANGING ROOM. THE SIZE OF GYM ELEVATED IN GIVEN PERIOD. THE CAFE IS ADDED IN FUTURE LAYOUT AT THE RIGHT SIDE OF ENTRANCE. THE DIAGRAM FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN THE NORTH-EAST SIDE OF MAP TWO DANCE STUDIOS IS CREATED ALONG WITH NEWLY BUILT CHANGE ROOM. THE SECONG OUTDOOR HALLS DECONSTRUCTED AND WHICH, IS REPLACED BY SPORTS HALL

THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
CHANGE
 THAT TOOK PLACE IN SCHOOL PLAYGROUND IN FUTURE PLANS AS COMPARED TO PRESENT LAYOUT. OVERALL
, THERE ARE SIGNIFICANT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
CHANGE
 IN FUTURE LAYOUT AS NEW FACILITIES IS INTRODUCED
 WHICH IS NOT AVAILABLE IN RECENT PLAN.

IT CAN BE CLEARLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SEEN
 THAT, THE LATTER PLAN FORMS A SINGLE PROPERTY WHICH IS DISTRIBUTED
 IN THREE Possible spelling mistake found.BuildingBoilingBailingBuglingBulling
BUILIDNG
 IN PRESENT. IN THE WEST SIDE OF MAP OUTDOOR COURTS IS REPLACED
 BY Possible spelling mistake found.LIES UER
LIESUER
 POOL AND THE CHANGING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
ROOM
 IS Possible spelling mistake found.ConstructedContracted
CONTRUCTED
 IN NEW PLAN This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
JUST
 BELOW THE Possible spelling mistake found.LIES URE
LIESURE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
ROOM
. THE SIZE OF POOL AND RECEPTION REMAINED THE SAME. SPORTS SHOP AND IS INTRODUCED
 ALONG WITH CHANGING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
ROOM
. THE SIZE OF GYM ELEVATED IN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
GIVEN
 PERIOD. THE 'CAFE' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
CAFE
 IS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
ADDED
 IN FUTURE LAYOUT The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on THE RIGHT SIDE"?On THE RIGHT SIDE
AT THE RIGHT SIDE
 OF ENTRANCE.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
THE
 DIAGRAM FURTHER
 COLLATE THAT, IN THE NORTH-EAST SIDE OF MAP TWO DANCE STUDIOS IS CREATED
 ALONG WITH NEWLY
 BUILT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
CHANGE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
ROOM
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
THE
Possible spelling mistake found.SecondSejongSEC ONG
SECONG
 OUTDOOR HALLS DECONSTRUCTED AND WHICH, IS REPLACED
 BY SPORTS Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphHALL.HALL!HALL?HALL:HALL,HALL;
HALL