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Technology influences society today, particularly on employees. On the plus side, it may assist them in working more efficiently and effectively. For example, in the past, individuals would save data by handwriting, but today they can do it using a computer, saving time. On the other side, some jobs can be done by technology, which implies that some businesses don't require as many staff, putting people out of employment.
Technology influences society
today
,
particularly
on employees. On the plus side, it may assist them in working more
efficiently
and
effectively
.
For example
, in the past, individuals would save data by handwriting,
but
today
they can do it using a computer, saving time. On the other side,
some
jobs can
be done
by technology, which implies that
some
businesses don't require as
many
staff
, putting
people
out of employment.
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IELTS academic Technology impact employee

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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