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The line graph illustrates the without jobs situation in Australia in a particular year wherein rural and urban areas. To begin with the first quarter, in the first part rural areas unemployment rates rose up to 6. 5% while urban areas values were decreased which was 2. 2%. After that, In the second quarter, the urban without jobs ratio was increased, which was 4% while rural rates were slumped up to 4. 5%. In the third quarter, 2% 0f unemployment value was declined in urban town and 2. 5% was inclined in a rural city. Furthermore, in between the third to fourth quarters, the ratio fluctuated, but the unemployment rates in urban areas went in an almost straight line. Then, in urban towns without jobs ratio rose in the next quarters, and in rural cities values went in a downward direction. Overall, Urban area's unemployment rates almost declined in all four quarters, and rural towns without jobs ratio fluctuated in all the quarters.
The line graph illustrates the without
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situation in Australia in a particular year wherein
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areas.

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rose up to 6. 5% while
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areas values
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town and 2. 5%
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areas went in an almost straight line. Then, in
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towns without
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cities values went in a downward direction.

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almost declined in all four
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