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Yearly payment in London spents

Yearly payment in London spents GJ1ro
The table procures data about rental payments and salaries in three spaces of London. In the table, we can observe weekly rents per property and per year salaries needed for three areas which are Notting Hill, Regent’s Park, and Fulham. In Notting Hill weekly rents per property for 1 bed 375, 2 bed 485 and 3 bed 738. Per year Salaries required for 1 bed 98500, 2 bed 127500 and 3 bed 194000. In Regent's park weekly rents per property for 1 bed 325, 2 bed 450 and 3 bed 650. Per year salaries required for 1 bed 85500, 2 bed 118000 and 3 bed 17500. In Fulham weekly rents per property for 1 bed 215, 2 bed 390 and 3 bed 600. Per year salaries required for 1 bed 57500, 2 bed 102500 and 3 bed 157500. Compare all the data in the table we can say that the most expensive area is Notting hill. This area requires 25% more weekly payments and salaries than Fulham and the second expensive area is Regent’s Park.
The table procures data about rental payments and
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salaries
in three spaces of London.

In the table, we can observe
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weekly
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rents
per
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property
and per
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year
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salaries
needed for three
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areas
which are Notting Hill, Regent’s Park, and
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Fulham
.

In Notting Hill
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weekly
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rents
per
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property
for 1
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bed
375, 2
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bed
485 and 3
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bed
738. Per
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year
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Salaries
required for 1
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bed
98500, 2
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bed
127500 and 3
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bed
194000.

In Regent's park
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weekly
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rents
per
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property
for 1
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bed
325, 2
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bed
450 and 3
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bed
650. Per
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year
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salaries
required for 1
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bed
85500, 2
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bed
118000 and 3
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bed
17500.

In
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Fulham
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weekly
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rents
per
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property
for 1
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bed
215, 2
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bed
390 and 3
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bed
600. Per
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year
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salaries
required for 1
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bed
57500, 2
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bed
102500 and 3
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bed
157500.

Compare all the data in the table we can say that the most expensive
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area
is
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Notting hill
. This
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area
requires 25% more
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weekly
payments and
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salaries
than
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Fulham
and the second expensive
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area
is Regent’s Park.
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IELTS academic Yearly payment in London spents

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175 words
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