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Technology as a factor of connecting people globally

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The rapid advancements of technology evolving throughout the 19th and 20th century has simplified the process of conveying information, changing the way people communicate within their society and across nations. This essay will examine the evolution of sophisticated communication devices and their significant influences on redefining the boundaries of connectivity and communication within a global scale. The design examples this essay will investigate include the telegraph, invented during the mid 1800’s, an electromagnetic device utilised for long-distance communication.
The rapid advancements of technology evolving throughout the 19th and 20th century has simplified the process of conveying information, changing the way
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communicate within their society and across nations. This essay will examine the evolution of sophisticated communication devices and their significant influences on redefining the boundaries of connectivity and communication within a global scale. The design examples this essay will investigate include the telegraph, invented during the mid
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IELTS academic Technology as a factor of connecting people globally

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