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The chart Below shows the amounts people spent on different consumer products in three European Countries in 2015b

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The bar graph compares the consumer expenditure for four different categories in the usa, Canada, the uk and Japan in 2009 It is clear that people of four countries spent the highest percentage of consumer expenditure On Housing and food. By contrast the least number of consumer spending On clothing and healthcare. In this chart the number of consumer expenditure spent On housing by the people of four different countries was highest at 26% in the usa, 23% in the uk and 22% in Japan and 20% in Canada respectively. The four countries people also spent the largest proportion of Their spending budget On food at 25% in Japan, 20% in the uk, and 15% in Canada and 14% in the usa respectively. However almost 5% of four Nations people consumer spending went On clothing. On the other hand, The canadian people spent the highest number of consumer expenditure on Transportation at 20% and other three nations people spent on transportation almost similarly. By contrast the least proportion of consumer spending on healthcare by the people of four countries at 11% in the usa, 6% in Canadian and japanize and 3% in the uk
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