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teachers that work too hard are the ones that burn out.”

teachers that work too hard are the ones that burn out. ” OwMWy
Hello. My name is Firuza. And I dont fully agree with this statement. We all know that teaching is one of the most challenging and responsible professions. Teachers must always be in the study in search. They are lifelong learners. On the other hand, working too hard is wrong idea. The only cause of fatigue may not be hard work, but not working with passion with pleasure. Because there are people who complain about their work, are dissatisfied with their lives and, most importantly, do not like their work. But the teacher forgets all the burnout when he sees the success of the student or himself, and works even harder. There is a teacher in our school who works harder than some young people despite being older. He teaches all day and, always preparing for tomorrow's lesson. Moreover, the cause of burnout may be dissatisfaction with one's work or inability to achieve one's goal. In such cases, not only the teacher but also other professionals feel tired. In my opinion fatigue is caused by dissatisfaction with work from this boredom. As there will be 3 sides to the truth which is yours, theirs and the truth. So the cause of burnout is not just too hard working
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the success of the student or himself, and works even harder. There is a
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despite being older. He teaches all day and, always preparing for tomorrow's lesson.

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