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News media is important in our society

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Currently the significance of media has been amphasized by one and all. meanwhile this source has more benefits or problems is a frequent of discussion. in this writing not only the arguments in favour of its importance will be analysed but also positive outcomes it have will be highlighted. Arguably; there are some arguments why news media is significant role in our society. firstly media also shapes our opinion. by saying so journalism media in almost providing information about events around the world and they aware our society. Secondly the media are also influent in the way they facilitate the spread of culture and Life style. meaning to say that information media provide the information of western culture band how people celebrate festival in their country. as an example as we all seem the news media showed in western culture how they celebrate Christmas and Easter egg on the sources. categorically stating that it cannot be ignored that the news media is imperative in our lives. Expounding further there are some positive influence of news media such as tv mobile phone. one of the point news media provide to voice less the voice. In conclusion many arguments media is imperative in our lives.
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is significant role in our society.
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also
shapes our opinion.
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journalism
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in almost providing information about
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events
around the
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world and
they aware our society.
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also
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influent
in the way they facilitate the spread of culture and Life style.
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meaning
to say that information
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provide the information of western culture band how
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people
celebrate festival in their country.
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as
an example as we all seem the
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categorically
stating that it cannot be
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is imperative in our
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such as
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tv
mobile phone.
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provide to voice less the voice.

In conclusion
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is imperative in our
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IELTS academic News media is important in our society

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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