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task one bar grah and table

task one bar grah and table E3ypr
dual vertical bar graph is given which is providing an information about the export earnings of one country in different categories during 2015 and 2016. Moreover, table is emphasising on the percentage change in export of each given sector in 2016 in contrast with former year. Overall, it is obvious that petroleum products had the highest export earnings during both mentioned years and Gems and Jewellery was the sole category that faced a declination in percentage after a year. According to given graph, it is evident that in 2015, the export earnings on petroleum products were 61 billion $ that upsurged by approximately 2 billion $ and touched 63. Moving further, in Engineered goods, earnings were 56 billion $ in former year as compared to 62 in latter one. Heading towards Gemes and Jewellery, export earnings in first year were 43 billion $, however, dropped by 2 billion $ in second year. Additionally, Agricultural products fetched earnings of 31 and 33 billion $ in 2015 and 2016 respectively. Finally, on Textiles, export earnings plunged down on 25 and 32 billion $ accordingly. From Table, it is clear that all categories grabbed an inclination in percentage change in values in 2016 in comparison with 2015 except Gemes and Jewellery. More specifically, Textiles grabbed the maximum proportion of 15. 24 being followed by Engineered goods with 8. 5. Moreover, Petroleum and Agricultural Products were at 3% and 0. 81% individually. And, at last, with 5. 18%, Gems and Jewellery plummeted.
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dual
vertical bar graph is
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given
which is providing an information about the
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export
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earnings
of one country in
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different
categories during 2015 and 2016.
Moreover
, table is
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emphasising
on the percentage
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change
in
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export
of each
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given
sector in 2016
in contrast
with former
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year
.
Overall
, it is obvious that petroleum
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products
had the highest
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export
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earnings
during both mentioned years and Gems and
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Jewellery
was the sole category that faced a declination in percentage after a year.

According to
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given
graph, it is evident that in 2015, the
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export
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earnings
on petroleum
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products
were 61
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billion
$ that upsurged by approximately 2
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billion
$ and touched 63. Moving
further
, in Engineered
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goods
,
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earnings
were 56
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billion
$ in former
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year
as compared to 62 in latter one. Heading towards
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Gemes
and
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Jewellery
,
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export
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earnings
in
first
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year
were 43
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billion
$,
however
, dropped by 2
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billion
$ in second
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year
.
Additionally
, Agricultural
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products
fetched
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earnings
of 31 and 33
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billion
$ in 2015 and 2016
respectively
.
Finally
, on Textiles,
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export
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earnings
plunged down on 25 and 32
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billion
$
accordingly
.

From Table, it is
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clear
that all categories grabbed an inclination in percentage
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change
in values in 2016
in comparison
with 2015 except
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Gemes
and
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Jewellery
. More
specifically
, Textiles grabbed the maximum proportion of 15. 24
being followed
by Engineered
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goods
with 8. 5.
Moreover
, Petroleum and Agricultural
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Products
were at 3% and 0. 81%
individually
. And, at last, with 5. 18%, Gems and
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Jewellery
plummeted.
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IELTS academic task one bar grah and table

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
248 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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