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TASK 1: A bar chart shows five countries wherw Australian students studied from 2004 to 2006.

TASK 1: A bar chart shows five countries wherw Australian students studied from 2004 to 2006. K0eXR

The provided bar graph represents the number of Australian students studied in different countries within a time span of three years, from 2004 to 2016. It can be clear, really seen that the USA and New Zealand are greater in proportion of the Australian students above 2500 as compared to the UK, Germany and Japan throughout the whole three year period. The proportion of students in the USA and New Zealand increased by each year of given period. A similar trend of increment in the number of students in the UK can be seen from 2004 to 2005, but the proportion of students remained same in 2006 as of 2005 that is slightly more than 1500. The proportion of Australian student in Germany were nearly 200 in the start of the time period, and then it is decreased to fewer more than 100. However, in the end of the given period, it approached to 200 in Germany. The figure of Australian students in Japan was 200 in 2006 and a sudden decrease occurred in very next year, and only 100 students enrolled in Japan. Then a gradual increase in the last year of time spent can be seen in Japan, with the number of students slightly higher than the previous year. (i. e fewer more than 100)

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