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This graph illustrated that how hydro-electricity is produced. this process need with different sort of stage to reach the final line. overall, The whole process is combined with 7 different process, which starts with the evaporation of water, ends with supply to local hospital or school. As the graph shows, Sun heat is accounted for the evaporation of seawater and followingly it leads to the rain. Rainwater is collected in a reservoir or dam where its stored for the primary stage for electricity production. Furthermore, the water is passed throw a valve where a turbine is connected to conduct an electromagnetic process to generate electricity. Meanwhile, used water is pumped back to the reservoir by a pump connected to the turbine. A high voltage line is connected through the turbine, which transmits the electric power to the transformer station. afterwards, An underground line is attached to the transformer section to supply the electricity to apartment houses, factories, and hospitals or schools. To summarize The complex procedure used water with several step to generate and supply electricity.

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