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The bar chart shows the figure for imprisonment five different country in the 1930 to 1980.

The bar chart shows the figure for imprisonment five different country in the 1930 to 1980. 267Lo
The bar chart shows the figure for imprisonment five different country in the 1930 to 1980. According to the basket in 1930 there was a 120 rise in the Canada and Australia and New Zealand is common 125 and 17 after 10 years us is more improvement even then other countries were falling and Britain is have no change every 11: 15 only one country is increased by 10 and other countries show same America is downIn 1916 there was the highest jump of 17 of forbidden 75 Australia 84 newzealand 124 America is down 10000 97 and 98 also most same for all the United States is speak Kafan 40008 so X hai Austria was falling again 60000
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the figure for imprisonment five
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in the 1930 to 1980. According to the basket in 1930 there was a 120 rise in the Canada and Australia and New Zealand is common 125 and 17 after 10 years us is more improvement even
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were falling and Britain is
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every 11: 15
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show
same America is
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1916 there was the highest jump of 17 of forbidden 75 Australia 84
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newzealand
124 America is down 10000 97 and 98
also
most same for all the United States is
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Austria was falling again 60000
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the figure for imprisonment five different country in the 1930 to 1980.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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