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Talk about some technology that you have started using fairly recently. You should say: What it is and what it does How it makes life better or easier How it is different to other similar technology And say whether you think you will still be using it in ten years’ time or not, and why

Talk about some technology that you have started using fairly recently. You should say: What it is and what it does How it makes life better or easier How it is different to other similar technology And say whether you think you will still be using it in ten years’ time or not, and why k6yKW
6 months ago, my brother - the knowledge tech-savvy person, he bought a robot vacuum for my family. It was great when I only have cleaned the house 2 or 3 times a week and most of other members are busy with their own work. So, now I would talk about it, which is called robot Xiaomi vacuum. despite called a robot, the outside is just a small while circular machine. However, I would be surprised that the incredible thing what it can do. Not only stopped with cleaning function but it also draws maps of my house. Everything is displayed on the mobile app. Moreover. I really more surprised when it met trouble and said: “Master, please save me”. It was humor. I really love this. Thank my brother and thank it, I have more times doing other things despite I still clean home at weekend. That is all, thanks for listening. To be honest, I spend about 3 to 4 hours studying, running deadline, or relaxing on the computer for daily life. Focusing for many hours looking at the computer screen makes my eyes often tired and, so I prefer to use my phone, with the small other.
6 months ago, my brother
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the knowledge tech-savvy person, he
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bought
a robot vacuum for my family.

It was great when I
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only
have cleaned the
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house
2 or 3 times a week and most of other members are busy with their
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own
work.

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So
,
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now
I would talk about it, which
is called
robot Xiaomi vacuum.
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despite
called a robot, the outside is
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just
a
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small
while circular machine.
However
, I would
be surprised
that the incredible thing what it can do. Not
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only
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stopped
with cleaning function
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but
it
also
draws maps of my
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house
. Everything
is displayed
on the mobile app.
Moreover
. I
really
more surprised when it met trouble and said: “Master,
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please
save me”. It was humor. I
really
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love
this.

Thank my brother and thank it, I have more times doing other things despite I
still
clean home at weekend.

That is
all, thanks for listening.

To be honest, I spend about 3 to 4 hours studying, running deadline, or relaxing on the computer for daily life. Focusing for
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many
hours looking at the computer screen
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makes
my eyes
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often
tired and,
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so
I prefer to
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use
my phone, with the
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small
other.
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IELTS academic Talk about some technology that you have started using fairly recently. You should say: What it is and what it does How it makes life better or easier How it is different to other similar technology And say whether you think you will still be using it in ten years’ time or not, and why

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  American English
6 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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