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The pie charts below show the favorite social media channel among Canadians for three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts are show which were mostly used social media in diffent years by the "Canadian people. Today the modern era people uses social media very widely for there entertainment as well as for this activities on social media. The Discusion about how much social media channels were used in furthermore paragraphs. Firstly, the facebook was exceesvely used in all three years. But it slightly goes down in next years from the begining it has 59% used but in 2012 and 2013 it goes down with Only 38 %. The next was Twitter which was 21% in 2011 but slightly goes up in next two years only with four percent increment. furthermore, There are three more Social media channels. Those are very Low percentage uses. But in all these only google was incread its percentage for Coming two years. 5% to 14%. Pinterest had almost same percentage all three years. on the other hand, Pinterest and google had same no. of percentage in 2011. To Conclude, All Social media channels were used by the users priorities during the three years. There were ups and downs. where there was google and pinterest was same in the year 2011.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the favorite social media channel among Canadians for three years.

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