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talk about producing elecrticity by the geothermal energy

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The diaphragm illustrates the steps, pieces of equipment, and the mechanism to produce electricity via the geothermal energy. It is clear from the graph, the process undergoes five phases to generate the electricity, three of them on the surface and the last under the earth in the soil. The first stage, cold water is pumped down till 1. 5 Km into the soil. After that, injection well will be erected and let the geothermal ionc warm the water and then pass to the production well. The third step represents pumping the hot water from the well towards the condense on the surface of the soil and let the steam to pass freely to the last phase. During the last stage, the turbine is powered by the steam that coming from the condenser which mainly helps the generator to produce electricity. Finally, the produced energy is transmitted to the grid. To sum up, we could say that, producing renewable energy by the geothermal power requires straightforward technology.
The diaphragm illustrates the steps, pieces of equipment, and the mechanism to produce electricity via the geothermal energy. It is
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clear
from the graph, the process undergoes five phases to generate the electricity, three of them on the surface and the last under the earth in the soil. The
first
stage,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
water
is pumped
down till 1. 5 Km into the soil. After that, injection well will
be erected
and
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let
the geothermal
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ionc
warm the water and then pass to the production well. The third step represents pumping the hot water from the well towards
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the condense
on the surface of the soil and
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let
the steam to pass
freely
to the last phase. During the last stage, the turbine
is powered
by the steam that coming from the condenser which
mainly
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helps
the generator to produce electricity.
Finally
, the produced energy
is transmitted
to the grid. To sum up, we could say that, producing renewable energy by the geothermal power requires straightforward technology.
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IELTS academic talk about producing elecrticity by the geothermal energy

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