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Talk about A time when someone suggested you to take the help of internet.

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Well, we all know that internet is very important in our day to day life. And during this pandemic online study is going on. For that I want a laptop and my neighbor just suggested one shop in Chandigarh. So, on 25, of march my father and me was going to Chandigarh and that's city totly new for both. We entered in Chandigarh around one complete my father and me roming here and there but we didn't get shop. And environment was also so hot and my father and me just tired. So we standing under the tree and drinking some energy drink and suddenly one person came and I ask him for that shop but soo sadly he also didn't know about that shop. but he give ous an advice to use goggle map than fastely I just opened goggle map and field shop name proximity in 10 or 15 min we find the shop and than we buy a laptop and my father and me was sooo happy. so on this day someone suggested me to use internet.
Well, we all know that internet is
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important
in our
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day to day
life. And during this pandemic online study is going on. For that I want a laptop and my neighbor
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just
suggested one
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shop
in Chandigarh.
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So
, on 25, of march my
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father
and me was going to Chandigarh and that's city
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totly
new for both. We entered in Chandigarh around one complete my
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father
and me
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roming
here and there
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but
we didn't
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get
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shop
. And environment was
also
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so
hot and my
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father
and me
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just
tired.
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So
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we standing
under the tree and drinking
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some
energy drink and
suddenly
one person came and I ask him for that
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shop
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but
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soo
sadly
he
also
didn't know about that
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shop
.
Use a comma before 'but' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
but
he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gives", "gave".
give
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ous
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "advice".
an advice
to
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use
goggle map than
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fastely
I
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just
opened goggle map and field
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shop
name proximity in 10 or 15 min we find the
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shop
and
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than
we
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buy
a laptop and my
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father
and me was
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sooo
happy.
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so
on this day someone suggested me to
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use
internet.
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IELTS academic Talk about A time when someone suggested you to take the help of internet.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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