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The bar graph shows the number of aslan elephant population ih 1994 dnd 2003 According to the har graph, it is clear that the nghest Asion elephant population in 19a4 and to0z is India which had 1o000 populatinof dsian elephant in 1997 and 1500 foputation 4004 decrased to asoo population in 1004 While ryanmar had the lower population thah India's which had 5200' papulation in 1997 and slightly decreased in 2004. In the same time, Thailand and Malaysia had rapidly dechased through 4047 and ioo+, which had approximatacly s 3200 in 199: 7 and 1100 ih 2004 However Vietnam Malaysia Srilanka laos and China maintairod the same level of asian elephant's populatisn betwen 1993 ahd 2004 To sum up, it can be seen that the number of asian elephants in countriss from the bar graph tend to reduce from the end of the period in ques timn.
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1994
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2003

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the
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to0z is India which had 1o000
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in 1997 and 1500
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4004
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India's which had 5200'
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which had
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s 3200 in 199: 7 and

1100
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2004
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Vietnam Malaysia

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and China
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elephant's
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1993
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2004

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number of
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in
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