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chart explained in the essay so that is short compared with other aAQa7

Between 2003 and 2013, people in the USA how frequently ate in fast food chains illustrated at the chart Overall, it can be apparently seen that people mostly went to the restaurants once a week and once or twice a month all that shown years and also, their fast food habits were not changed noticeably despite the time period changes. It is clearly seen that, in 2003, about above 30 percent of society went to restaurants once a week regularly and once or twice a month rates nearly the same with it. People who went there several times stayed at above 15 and these all mentioned rates were not changed significantly in 2006 and 2013. USA resident who got in the food places every day stayed at under 5percent also people who never been there showed at 5 percent also these two rates also decreased minute in the other given years.

Between 2003 and 2013, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in the USA how frequently
 ate in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 food chains illustrated at the chart

Overall
, it can be apparently
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seen
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
mostly
 went to the restaurants You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalreadyformerlypreviouslyearlierlatebefore
once
 a week and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalreadyformerlypreviouslyearlierlatebefore
once
 or twice a month all that shown years and also
, their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 food habits were not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
noticeably
 despite the time period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

It is clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, in 2003, about above 30 percent of society went to restaurants You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalreadyformerlypreviouslyearlierlatebefore
once
 a week regularly
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalreadyformerlypreviouslyearlierlatebefore
once
 or twice a month rates nearly
 the same with it. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 who went there several times stayed at above 15 and these all mentioned rates were not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
significantly
 in 2006 and 2013.

USA resident who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 in the food places every day stayed at under 5percent also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who never been there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 at 5 percent also
 these two rates also
 decreased minute in the other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 years. 