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indifferent nowadays forest was a many decreased because at the moment people are many cutting to plants so people will very difficult live on Earth so people should we grow more and more plants because the year will always better which that people will not difficult at the moment and infer the time to compendium although today masses are many cutting to plants but if it is responsibility of government authorities should we ban on people which are cut to plants because in future time people will very difficult

indifferent nowadays forest was a many decreased because at the moment people are many cutting to plants so people will very difficult live on Earth so people should we grow more and more plants because the year will always better which that people will not difficult at the moment and infer the time to compendium although today masses are many cutting to plants but if it is responsibility of government authorities should we ban on people which are cut to plants because in future time people will very difficult 1nkpA
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IELTS academic indifferent nowadays forest was a many decreased because at the moment people are many cutting to plants so people will very difficult live on Earth so people should we grow more and more plants because the year will always better which that people will not difficult at the moment and infer the time to compendium although today masses are many cutting to plants but if it is responsibility of government authorities should we ban on people which are cut to plants because in future time people will very difficult

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