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The table reveals the data about key health indicators for six nations. The data has been calibrated in numbers. It is evident that the maximum number of people per doctor and infant mortality rate is in Vietnam and India. However, in calorie intake and life expectancy are maximum in America. To begin with, Vietnam and India have around 2500 people per doctor as compare to China Which is 809 and Japan os 610 people per doctor America and Russia have the lower number of people per doctor. In life expectancy china, japan, and America have the same number of life expectancy which is around 70 whereas other three nation has around 60 life expectancy. Moving futher, India has the maximum infacnt mortality nmumber which is 79 wheres vietnam and china have same number of infrant morality which is 30.
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America and Russia have the lower
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expectancy which is around 70 whereas other three
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IELTS academic table show highlight some key health indicator for six countries

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