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Table graph shows the estimated maximum number of Asian elephants

Table graph shows the estimated maximum number of Asian elephants 5ayGP

The bar graph compares the approximate maximum population of Asian elephants in 9 countries of Asian continent in 1997 and in 2004. Overall, by far the highest estimated maximum population of Asian elephants was in India in both years, whereas the figures for China were nowhere near as high as those numbers. Interestingly, in all countries but Cambodia and Laos the elephant population fell. Focusing on the countries with the greatest elephant populations first, India took the lead in both years, although its estimated figures decreased from just under 10000 in 1997 to around 7500 in 2004. The count for elephants in Myanmar, at the same time, closely followed India’s pattern, with the figures falling by approximately 600. Thailand placed third in 1997, but it experienced the sharpest decline in its elephant population. The elephant population change in Cambodia and Laos was different. While in the former the figures rose negligibly from about 1300 to 1500, in the latter the population of elephants plateaued at slightly more than 1000 individuals. As for the remaining countries, Vietnam’s number of elephants was not as high as those of Malaysia and Sri Lanka in 1997. However, in 2004, Sri Lanka had significantly more elephants than the other two, at 2700.

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