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QUESTION:Inspite of advances made in Agriculture many people in the world still go hungry .why is this case and what could be done

QUESTION: Inspite of advances made in Agriculture many people in the world still go hungry. why is this case and what could be done pKMG0

Answer Most people still suffer from hunger globally irrespective of agricultural advancement. This could be attributed to ignorance and poverty. public enlightenment and provision of loans and equipment by Government can curb this problem. Hunger is considered a global problem that is the reason why reseachers and agriculturists had worked hard over the years to improve farming which had also given rise to high productivity. Their studies had transformed into manufacturing of mechanised equipments such as tractors, plough, and other important tools as well as improved seeds and roots that makes farming easier and enjoyable. However, many people lack the knowledge to operate this machines and also the particular season and the type of soil suitable for a particular crops. These factors have hindered productivity and there by given rise to low food production so access to food materials to some individuals are compromised. In addition lack of funds to procure these equipment agricultural produce are also an issue of concern for some because many of these items are not cost effective therefore quite a number of farmers resolve to peasant farming and the resultant effects are minimal outcome in food supply. However some strategies could be adopted in order to tackle the issue of hunger. public enlightenment inform of community mobilization and advocacy should be done in order to teach people about mechanised farming, the type of crops and usage, right from the grassroot. Also incentives inform of loans and supply of agricultural materials such as seeds and roots at no cost or subsidized rate should be done by the Authorities. Finally a healthy nation is one devoid of hunger, so all stakeholders should collaborate and ensure that they do their part towards making food available by implementing all the necessary steps needed to achieve success in food production. Adrenaline please vet for me. thanks

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