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The chart below shows transport preferences among young people in some countries in proportion

The chart below shows transport preferences among young people in some countries in proportion Lb5g6
The chart gives information about the predilection of transport among young people in some countries. Overall, as can be seen in the chart, cars are the means of transport that everyone likes to use the most. Meanwhile, the percentage of people who choose to use motorbikes and bicycles is quite small. The number of people choosing a car as the first choice in Italy is the highest with more than 70%. while in the uk and united states the figure reaches 60%. France is the country with the lowest percentage of people choosing a car with 40%. Motorcycles are the least preferred means of transport. the United States is the place with the highest index of motorbike use with 30%. For the remaining 3 locations, this number is only in the upper and lower threshold of 10%, respectively from the most to the least: France, the UK, Italy. In France, bicycles are the most chosen means of transport with nearly 50%, higher than the percentage of cars - the most chosen means of transport in the rest of the countries. Besides, 30% is the selection index of people living in the UK. The number of cyclists in the United States and Italy is relatively low at 10% and slightly over 10% respectively.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows transport preferences among young people in some countries in proportion

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