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summary of information following a renovation of the grandville stadium from 2017

summary of information following a renovation of the grandville stadium from 2017 25pkA
The bar chart depicts information about the attendance in theater, sporting events and concerts held at the Grandville stadium. The data for each type of event is shown for 2017 and forecasted till 2020 and 2030 following a development project on the premises. Overall, we can see a general rise for all three events till 2030. The greatest rise will be for theater and concerts, while sporting events will show a moderate increase following the renovations. However, sporting events has been and will continue to have the greatest attendance in comparison to the rest. In the baseline year 2017, theater events accounted for 10, 000 visitors. Yet, it should jump close to 50, 000 within the next 13 years. Similarly, concerts are predicted to reach close to 130, 000 people from about 30, 000 before the improvements in 2017. Sporting events will result in around 170 000 spectators in 2030 following the renovation. Regardless it had close 150 000 attendees in 2017. The combined amount of people from concerts and theater events are just shy from the attendees from sporting events by about 10 000.
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and
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concerts
held at the
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stadium. The data for each type of
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event
is shown
for 2017 and forecasted till 2020 and 2030 following a development project on the premises.

Overall
, we can
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a general rise for all three
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events
till 2030. The greatest rise will be for
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theater
and
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concerts
, while sporting
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events
will
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show
a moderate increase following the renovations.
However
, sporting
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has been and will continue to have the greatest attendance
in comparison
to the rest.

In the baseline year 2017,
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theater
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events
accounted for 10, 000 visitors.
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, it should jump close to 50, 000 within the
next
13 years.
Similarly
,
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concerts
are predicted
to reach close to 130, 000
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people
from about 30, 000
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before
the improvements in 2017.

Sporting
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events
will result in around 170 000 spectators in 2030 following the renovation. Regardless it had close 150 000 attendees in 2017. The combined amount of
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people
from
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theater
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shy from the attendees from sporting
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events
by about 10 000.
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