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summarize this bar chart about consuming fast food in the USA

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The bar chart depicts the proportion of the frequency of eating junk food over ten years in the United States of America. It clear from the graph that, the vast majority of the Americans preferred to have a fast meal once a week. According to what is shown, in 2003, the lowest percentage presented the people had fast food every day at nearly 4 percent. Then, the ratio increased sharply and rocketed its peak as it reached 31 percent for having junk food once a week. Moreover, the rate dropped slightly to 30 percent representing the Americans who ate fast food once or twice a month. The proportions were similar for having fast meal a few times a year and several times a week at 13 percent and 16 percent respectively. Secondly, in 2006, the behavior of the ratio was quite similar, where the rate sustained gradually between 2 percent and 33 percent. Finally, in 2013, the rate for the citizens who had a junk meal every day was at the same level in 2006 at 2 percent. In addition, the highest contribution to eating junk food once or twice a month was about 33. 5 percent. To sum up, we could say that, the most citizens of the USA tended to not have a good deal of unhealthy meals.
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over ten years in the United States of America. It
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from the graph that, the vast majority of the Americans preferred to have a
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meal
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once
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. Then, the ratio increased
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representing the Americans who ate
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or twice a month. The proportions were similar for having
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a few times a year and several times a week at 13
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and 16
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respectively
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, in 2006, the behavior of the ratio was quite similar, where the rate sustained
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and 33
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, in 2013, the rate for the citizens who had a
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every day was at the same level in 2006 at 2
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or twice a month was about 33. 5
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. To sum up, we could say that, the most citizens of the USA tended to not have a
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