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Compare the two maps of paradise island in past and present. Illustrate the changes.

Compare the two maps of paradise island in past and present. Illustrate the changes. BMQV9
The given blueprints depict the infrastructure, geography and buildings of Paradise island in the past and present time. The most apparent changes are the introduction of new transportation and recreational facilities. In more details, the scientific research station in the western part of the island is replaced by a hotel complex and its swimming pool. in addition to that, it is connected to an open restaurant in the centre of the place, which is the built in the place where there were forests in the past. And also, a cafe is established in the eastern part. Moreover, a cycle path is laid encircling the island and the pier in the west is expanded. The boats are replaced by cruise ship. Most importantly, swimming is permitted in the beach on the north side. Overall, the island is completely renovated for the benefit of the citizens.
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blueprints depict the infrastructure, geography and buildings of Paradise
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island
in the past and present time. The most apparent
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changes
are the introduction of new transportation and recreational facilities. In more
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details
, the scientific research station in the western part of the
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island
is replaced
by a hotel complex and its swimming pool.
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in
addition to that, it
is connected
to an open restaurant in the
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centre
of the place, which is the
A hyphen is missing in the adjective "built-in".
built in
the place where there were forests in the past. And
also
, a
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cafe
is established
in the eastern part.
Moreover
, a cycle path
is laid
encircling the
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island
and the pier in the west
is expanded
. The boats
are replaced
by cruise ship. Most
importantly
, swimming
is permitted
in the beach on the north side.
Overall
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
is completely renovated for the benefit of the citizens.
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IELTS academic Compare the two maps of paradise island in past and present. Illustrate the changes.

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