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The table shows that the payment of male and female scientists of NIH in various positions. In general, males are receiving more salary than females in all occupations except one position named Lab chief MD. It is clear from the illustration that, male scientists are paid more than female ones in eight occupations. The status of PhD presents a disparity ( 597 dollars)between male and female salaries. There is the lowest difference in their salary is 97 dollars found in the position of Lab Chief PhD. The other three positions like Md, Section chief MD and section Chief PhD depicts that the difference between gents and ladies income is medium compared to the rest of the positions and its average is 3631 dollars. a small variation among their incomes is revealed in the investigator MD where 177 male employees gain 83 249 dollars and 43 females receive 81585 dollars. It is also noticeable that only one position female obtain higher salary than male. the female earns 105696 dollars whereas males earn 9585 dollars in the same occupation called Lab chief MD. In summary, the table clearly expresses the variation in the incomes between male-female scientists.
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scientists of NIH in various
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are receiving more
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in all occupations except one
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named Lab
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MD. It is
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from the illustration that, male scientists
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ones in eight occupations. The status of PhD presents a disparity
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. There is the lowest difference in their
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is 97
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found in the
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of Lab
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PhD. The other three
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MD and section
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PhD depicts that the difference between gents and ladies income is medium compared to the rest of the
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and its average is 3631
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receive 81585
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earns 105696
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earn 9585
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in the same occupation called Lab
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MD. In summary, the table
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expresses the variation in the incomes between male-female scientists.
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