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summarize the developments that will take place in this area

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The maps illustrate the developments that are going to take place in the university sports center in the future. It is clear from the graph, the area will be totally redeveloped. According to what is shown, on the western part of the region, outdoor courts will be demolished and modern leisure pool will be erected instead with changing room and sports shop in the west of it. Moving to the middle section, it is distinguished that, it is going almost to remain unchanged in spite of the gym extension towards the east. This leads us to the eastern district, the university will redevelop it into an unique area of several kinds of sports. Firstly, the another outdoor courts will be turned to sports hall basically, in addition, two modern dance studios will be constructed in the east of the new hall. Furthermore, café and changing room are going to be built in south of that modern sports hall. Overall, we could say that, it is evident that, the apparently significant changes that will take place in the region are going to make region’s overall plan more modernized.

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sports
 center in the future. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph, the area will be totally
 redeveloped. According to what is shown
, on the western part of the region, outdoor courts will be demolished
 and modern leisure pool will be erected
instead
 with changing room and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop in the west of it. Moving to the middle section, it is distinguished
 that, it is going almost to remain unchanged This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
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an
 unique area of several kinds of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
. Firstly
, the another outdoor courts will be turned
 to The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "sport".sport
sports
 hall basically
, in addition
, two modern dance studios will be constructed
 in the east of the new hall. Furthermore
, café and changing room are going to be built
 in south of that modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall. Overall
, we could say that, it is evident that, the apparently
 significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that will take place in the region are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 region’s overall
 plan more modernized. 