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Summarise the information in the diagram for how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Summarise the information in the diagram for how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. VYlO6
The diagram illustrates how corn is processed to become ethanol fuel. Overall, ethanol fuel is the purified liquid obtained as a result of boiling and fermenting ground corn methodically. Initially, corn is collected and stored to be ground and cooked with added water for a 4-hour period. Once it has been cooked, the corn is left fermenting for 48 hours until it is ready for the separation process. The fermented corn is separated into solid and liquid. From this point, the liquid resulted from the separation available after the fermentation step it is purified as ethanol for 5 hours to then be stored and ready to be distributed. Transportation is the last link of the chain.
The diagram illustrates how
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corn
is processed
to become ethanol fuel.
Overall
, ethanol fuel is the purified liquid obtained
as a result
of boiling and fermenting ground
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corn
methodically
.

Initially
,
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corn
is collected
and stored to
be ground
and cooked with
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added
water for a 4-hour period. Once it has
been cooked
, the
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corn
is
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left
fermenting for 48 hours until it is ready for the separation process.

The fermented
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corn
is separated
into solid and liquid. From this point, the liquid resulted from the separation available after the fermentation step it
is purified
as ethanol for 5 hours to then
be stored
and ready to
be distributed
. Transportation is the last link of the chain.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information in the diagram for how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
116 words
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