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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustartes the population of Japan over a hundred years from 1950 to 2055. It shows the increase in population from past, present and future trends where the population is discussed in terms of millions. Overall, the least population was found to be in the year 1950 with 84. 1 million people where as the population reached the maximum in the year 2005 with 127. 8 million people. There were only 4. 1 million people in Japan who were aged 65 years and above in the year 1950 which calculates to 4. 9 percentage of total polulation of people aged 65 years and over. The senior citizen population gradually increased to 20. 0% with 25. 7 million people in the next 55 years of 1950. It is expected to reach to 34. 0% with 37. 2 million people and 41. 0% with with 36. 5 million people in the years 2035 and 2055 respectively. Since Japan has seen an increase in the total count of people over the years, it is evident from the graph that the overall population is expected to decrease to 89. 9 million people in next 30 years.
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of Japan over a hundred years from 1950 to 2055. It
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the increase in
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from past, present and future trends where the
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, the least
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1950 with 84. 1
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people
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reached the maximum in the
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year
2005 with 127. 8
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in Japan who
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1950 which calculates to 4. 9 percentage of total
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aged 65 years and over. The senior citizen
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55 years of 1950. It is
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and 41. 0%
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36. 5
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in the years 2035 and 2055
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Since Japan has
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over the years, it is evident from the graph that the
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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