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The line graph provide information on indicators of price changes for the items(fruits, vegetables, sugars, Sweets and corbonated drincs )needed for the farm from 1978 to 2009. Overall, sugars and sweets, concumer price index and corbonated drinks grew slowly during the 30years. But, fresh fruits and vegetables rises sharply compared to tje remaining 3 sections in the same year. On the one hand, from 1979 to1985 years all sectoins grew invisable from about 60%. However, from 1986 fruits and vegetables grews dramatically. In the same year, carbonate drinks are not noticable, which indicate the down pass. Similarly, the money spend on coloborate drinks has the lowest pass value. Further analiysis from the graph in 1979 years all section increased by 1985. But, sugar and sweets, concumer price indes growth value was almost the same by 2009. However, sugar and sweets' value consumer price index in comparision lowest.
The line graph provide information on indicators of
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Sweets and
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corbonated
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drincs
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needed for the farm from 1978 to 2009.

Overall
, sugars and sweets,
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concumer
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price
index and
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corbonated
drinks grew
slowly
during the 30years.
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But
, fresh fruits and vegetables rises
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compared to
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remaining 3 sections in the same year.

On the one hand, from 1979 to1985 years all
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sectoins
grew
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invisable
from about 60%.
However
, from 1986 fruits and vegetables
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grews
dramatically
. In the same
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year
, carbonate drinks are not
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noticable
, which indicate the down pass.
Similarly
, the money spend on
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coloborate
drinks has the lowest pass value.

Further
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analiysis
from the graph in 1979 years all section increased by 1985.
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But
, sugar and sweets,
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concumer
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price
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indes
growth value was almost the same by 2009.
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, sugar and sweets' value consumer
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index in
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comparision
lowest.
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